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  Mark Comments   6       Link to brief: 3 Use of media terminology (language/representation/theory): 3   Comments for AQA: The candidate demonstrates a clear statement of intent with aspects of media language demonstrated such as the use of settings, character types and traits which help communicate the narrative of the music video There is a lot of subject specific media terminology referenced throughout the statement such as visceral, voyeuristic and vicarious audience pleasures   Next steps: Be careful as your statement of intent still mentions the fact that is it a preliminary product rather than the actual coursework. Also remember you are writing this as if you have not yet filmed or produced any material so go back and amend this accordingly In places, your statement of intent feels too descriptive instead consider how this would appeal to your intended target audience and what message your product will contain for them. Consider other theories...

1) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write  two  WWW bullet points (What Went Well) and  two  Next Step bullet points for your preliminary exercise.  WWW: -I managed to use a range of different clips for my video. -Somewhat of a clear narrative and have some good dialogue. Next step: -To improve on making a narrative story line -Add more clips relevant to the topic of my video -Add more close up shots,long shots  2) What have you  learned  from the preliminary exercise that will help you in the actual coursework project? List  three  things you have learned or will do differently as a result of this exercise. You may want to comment on organisation, actors, filming, editing or something else entirely but be  specific .  -I learnt how to mute clips,shorten clips,placing camera angles,dialogue and publishing my music video. WWW: 1. Very good demonstration ...